Saturday, May 18, 2013

STUDENT WRITING: POSITION by MAYELA PEREZ

Why Women Need to Be Independent

Being a strong, independent woman doesn’t necessarily require that you be a die-hard feminist. Rather, it means learning to express who you are inside, whether you are shy and soft-spoken or loud and assertive, without trying to fit a certain mold implied by your being a female.

Women should not base their happiness on being in a relationship, women need to have a man to love and enhance their life, not define it.
Nothing is forever. Even the perfect relationship might end one day, so women need to be sure that they have a stong enough cushion to land on after a break up or divorce. Women need to stay eduated. Being educated not only gives you the skills and knowledge you will need to pursue your career, it also makes you more well-respected by people you encounter in your life.

On the other hand, women need to take care of their bodies. Personal strengh is manifested physically, mentally and emotionally. If you want to be a strong, independent woman, you need look no further than your own body. Additionally, if a woman wants to be truly independent, she must learn how to pay for her own life so that she doesn’t have to rely on other people, but she needs to spend her money wisely and avoid wastefulness on unnecessary things.
Finally, the most important thing in a woman’s life is to give to others. One of the best ways that women can use their strength is to give back to those who are less fortunate than they are. You don’t have to be rich or affluent to make a positive impact on another person, only practice acts of kindness.

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